It was upon a moonlit night,
Upon a night, with the moon so round
You, who were mine of divine right,
Floated in the lap of this uncertain sound.
Your hair was smoke,
A shade darker than the velvet
That the night had wrapped.
You traced fairy lights in the night,
A long roughly carved out snake;
“The birds, the birds!” you screamed,
And you were right,
The fire was burning bright.
Your arms were spread
Like Aphrodite’s archway.
This misfit’s euphoria was bound
In your moonflower eyes.
3 comments:
awwsome baby i just love it....how can i ever dream about breaking up wid such an amazing poet!!!!muah i love u...hope u keep writing stuffs like this 4ever..and u better write thm 4 me and no1 else.....
thought i'd surprise you with a comment, lil' poetic boy! nice imagery once again, especially loved the last two lines, where you bring in the "misfit.". but "moon so round"? i like you more when you don't try to rhyme, y'know...
hey....u r juzzzz tooo gud in ur poems....awesome..awesome is da only word 2 describe ur capability..
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