Thursday, February 01, 2007

Moonflower Eyes

It was upon a moonlit night,

Upon a night, with the moon so round

You, who were mine of divine right,

Floated in the lap of this uncertain sound.

Your hair was smoke,

A shade darker than the velvet

That the night had wrapped.

You traced fairy lights in the night,

A long roughly carved out snake;

“The birds, the birds!” you screamed,

And you were right,

The fire was burning bright.

Your arms were spread

Like Aphrodite’s archway.

This misfit’s euphoria was bound

In your moonflower eyes.

3 comments:

shrimoyee said...

awwsome baby i just love it....how can i ever dream about breaking up wid such an amazing poet!!!!muah i love u...hope u keep writing stuffs like this 4ever..and u better write thm 4 me and no1 else.....

Bone said...

thought i'd surprise you with a comment, lil' poetic boy! nice imagery once again, especially loved the last two lines, where you bring in the "misfit.". but "moon so round"? i like you more when you don't try to rhyme, y'know...

Raina Mohanty said...

hey....u r juzzzz tooo gud in ur poems....awesome..awesome is da only word 2 describe ur capability..